Programs used: Audacity
Hardware used: A pair of skullcandys + built in mic
Time from start to completely finished: 1 hour


Or click here.

There. Also you sound like you're whispering the whole way through.

Deak's spirit has obviously overpowered your spirit.

man this is straight fire bro where can i buy your mixtape

i don't like rap (aside from shahmen)
but i can cnc your songwriting and stuff
you sound like you forced out circumstances at around 0:37
I suggest investing into a pop filter and a real mic if you want to do this professionally. The low budget ones are around 100$/200$ + another 30$ for a good pop filter but it will record your voice at a better quality.
Work on your audio mixing. I can barely hear your voice over the song. Probably because you were too quiet.
Also, you didn't sound confident in the last few lines. But hey! it's your first time rapping.
Good start.

omfg man
i rly liked, you need to improve your flow though, and find your voice tone, btw
keep doing this