Yes matarika! This shows very noticeable improvement, well done!
as you already pointed out, 0:20-0:23 didn't quite work, but it would've been very cool if it had, keep trying these things out
Originally Posted by
matarika
(the hands are too dark and clashed with shader)
but it wasn't horrible enough to take out
You can fix this with CC. If you need help with how to do that, I'll direct you to someone better than me at CC
All in all great job mata, I'm very happy to see you trying something new (not that I didn't like your old stuff, but it's always cool to do something different)