HTOTM: FUSION
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principio ad finem
It has been quite a while since I've done replays, so I wanted to come back


we'll start off with a scrapped replay, it was my first attempt to manip at -30, I think it turned out good nonetheless
thanks to Ifred for the opener
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!ghost.rpl (288.6 KB, 29 views)
Last edited by Rial; Oct 11, 2015 at 11:10 PM.
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hellu Rial.

Ok, the opener looks good to me, i like the speed and the start of the manip.
The manip is not bad, but not good too. try rotate Uke into the air.
the Boom looks good, but the punch is weird, the last dm is cool. keep it up, not much to say .
Factory. Sometimes sleeping.
oie

pelo visto vc usou o mesmo openner do ifred , provavelmente foi uma competição interna certo?
eu gostei da maneira de vc começou o manip , mas o ultimo DM ficou meio forçado.

ótimo replay de qualquer forma
Originally Posted by Arakata View Post
hellu Rial.

Ok, the opener looks good to me, i like the speed and the start of the manip.
The manip is not bad, but not good too. try rotate Uke into the air.
the Boom looks good, but the punch is weird, the last dm is cool. keep it up, not much to say .

Originally Posted by Love View Post
oie

pelo visto vc usou o mesmo openner do ifred , provavelmente foi uma competição interna certo?
eu gostei da maneira de vc começou o manip , mas o ultimo DM ficou meio forçado.

ótimo replay de qualquer forma

Originally Posted by Shiro View Post
it was really cool up until around 280 but then it wasn't as cool


thank you guys, I'll try to improve

this replay I had a little help from dezrai just on the last punch
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!glass screen bulletproof.rpl (300.3 KB, 26 views)
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The start was pretty smooth and looked nice but the first kick looked kinda weak.

I think the manip would be more interesting if you gave uke more rotation and try to avoid changing the direction of the spin as well.

Your tori movement and dms where rly good.

overall dankass replay
the opener is ok. Now the manip is cool but the DMs are... idk, neutral (not bad but not good too). gj.
Factory. Sometimes sleeping.
glass screen bulletproof:

the opener was nice
i'm not too fascinated by the manip
dms were decent but they really could've been done better