Try to place the keyframes a bit further away from eachother. (I usually wait 40 frames or so before I place the next one.)
I don't like the tiny black bars that appears in the bottom and to the left. I think your Toribash
window is missplaced so OBS isn't recording the whole window.
Interesting choice of music.
The video itself was quite interesting.
Good job. 5/10
Looks cool. Maybe in the start you should add a atmo (Rain atmo because its a dark sad feeling at the beginning). Keyframing need a bit work, and maybe disable resamples or else when you pause the video you see 2 same picture frames. But still it was good