hmmh... those are starting to be good already.
actually there are no mistakes, just some things that were good but coulda been better. one of them was the kick in balance. I woulda liked it more if you were closer to uke and hence woulda pushed the head more back after the decap, making it look cooler and the head fly faster.
keep it up
and people, the thread is now officially watchworthy. come on you lazy bums, I don't wanna be here alone
Aren't these getting redundant?
onthefloor was the best IMHO. the kick was nice and solid, unlike in the first one, where it's just a short-trajectory quickie that scrapes uke's forehead. I don't like kicks with that little distance between the beginning of the strike and impact.
icanclapproper was almos as good but there was an annoying sharp change of direction in the prepping, which brought it a notch down from "onthefloor"
and these replays really deserve more views. You might wanna start a new thread that's not known as one with bad replays (the first ones in this were kinda bad...).