Hi guys , i need constructive criticism for my new video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jTIrMN8fC0

Hope you enjoyed !

Replays were descent but keyfeaming needs improvement, speed up the replays too I noticed some low frames. If you use something like fcp, Sony Vegas, or ae then try to add some sync or velo. Pm me if you want some extra help.

Cheers

Hi , Thank's for the advices . I'm on mac and i can't use Sony Vegas or ae . I only work on "Imovie " :/ . I'll mp you soon

do a better keyframing,apply and use more effects.
you pc btw support shaders,put the configs on max(with reflections and other stuff),and reduce the replay speed,then,record,on the editor,speed up it,it will make it looks like no-lag.
the music selection was pretty good,but do a better sync with the song.

Please include programs used, name of replay makers and stuff like that in the first post (Read the art board rules)

Anyway, about the video: I'll strongly suggest that you get a different editing program such as SV or AAE (They should both work on mac, although I see many mac users using AAE)

You should also try to record at higher fps, fraps allows you to lower your frame rate cap so that you can speed it up later and get a nice 60fps

Work on your freecam too, try and get it smooth and follow a nice path around both toris instead of flying through them

Good job anyway, I hope to see more from you o/

I'll try to work on AE , I'll try x) .
Thank's for advices guys .