hi guys, i am making an advertisement banner for our clan

looking for some cnc, feel like i could improve



thanks

looks fine but the tori is really hard to see because it blends in with the background to much. try making the background behind the tori contrast a bit more with the skin. also another thing is the work ''BAD'' blends in too much with the grey behind much like the tori, so again make the background a slightly different color scheme at the very least. all in all id rate this a 4 out of 10 because its boring and its hard to tell why the tori is there the tori doesn't add anything for me its just hard to tell what its is, and over all its pretty dark, so it could be brightened up a bit too.

thanks i guess i mean 4/10 is my life goals

I think that you should make the purpose of the banner clear. People won't be able to tell what it's up there for if it just says BAD

hm,ok.
the second banner(BAD is Recruiting) looks pretty good.
but the tori on it make it looks like a bit strange,the painting on sides is great.
and the symbol make it looks really good.
but try to make more stuff for it(i mean "stuff" as: High definition tori(on max),a great pose,details on the text,such as shadows and lights.)

great banner

thanks mate ill do that

also,as addition,try to do some parts with more bright/radiant colors to make it more attractive