Photoshop CS6 & Wacom Intous Pen&Touch

Need some constructive criticism and advices.

First try? This is pretty damn cool

Yes. First one. Never tried to draw something with tablet before.

Looks like he has a plastic patch over his nose. Shade that shit instead of drawing outlines.

Then I'd like to see you move past the sketching, need to see more before I can really say more.

nice one baby

is this storm spirit?

Although it's a sketch, i really like the style you took with the crosshatching. I like the color palette choice a lot. I think it's pretty damned impressive for a first try. It'll be amazing to see works from you once you've had more practice for sure. Keep it up! Lots of potential.

I'm on google chrome and this link seems to be broken :/

work on your pen pressure settings, start with a sketch, then move to lining it, and then do colouring and shading, honestly i'd recommend watching anime speed paints, some ones that have definitetly helped me are below