This is the first video by you i actually liked at least a bit. The subtle sounds along with the (a little too much) diffused cc were great. You really nailed the atmosphere on this one.
I think you really shouldn't credit the replaymakers in the video itself, since you're honestly really bad that (your fonts, placing, colors, timing etc.), if you just keep that stuff in the description of the video, you'll be able to maintain the atmosphere much more immersive. Your camera work still needs some sharpening too, you should really try to get the hang of expertcam. As we all know, the result of using the normal in-game freecam is, like showcased well in this video, a little choppy, but not fps-wise. I'm saying this in the sense that it slows down between the keyframes, which makes it look like a car malfunctioning every few seconds. With expertcam you would easily get rid of this, and have the ability to maintain the speed of your cameras movement solid. This would really be important, since most of your editing is basically keyframes.