Crusty Rusty comin at you with some replays. Hope y'all can give me some massive insight on my replays so I can make em better in the future



Better replays will be toward the back



And enjoy

ayy dont post alot of replays.
anyway you tori look pretty much relaxed probably because of the lumbar.try to make it feat with your spining direction.
also dont make your arms like in running position.
need more creativty and a bit more of working in moves.
gj

Noted,
ty muches
New replay

Here Goes Nothing

Monstrocity

Opener is generic, I've heard you do sparring, maybe you'd be better in -30 gravity
I'd recommend hold you're neck and wrists, it just feels better for me, so you don't see your wrist and neck flopping all over the place

Lift to his chest was good, until you contracted your knee, I understand if it was too powerful and you couldn't go back to uke, you could go for a split or something else
If you're going for a manipulation, try not to let uke touch the floor
Try not bumping your head during replays, most people don't like that

Decap kick was good, and worked out well, although I didn't like that it was uneven, but that's just my opinion
Second kick was nice, you probably should've ungrabbed right after you got the dms
Split was well done, not much to say about that
Glute kick was nice, but I was expecting some sort of boom, or crotch kick
Skeet to head was good, quite far away as well
Second skeet was phenomenal

gj

thank you for you CnC Ray
I'll give the -30 a shot
and this is the type of CnC I'm really looking for
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I gave the -30 grav a shot and I think this worked out fairly well.
its incredibly simple to what I've done and it does change my style a lot, but I prefer this type of play
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Made OnePunch, I enjoyed making this one, the time and room helped my set up a bunch,
My priorities are jacked up, I went for the aesthetic instead of the importance

bump

i see the potential here, you just need to smooth out your replays, don't rush them and just
take time to smooth everything out and make it look nice, you will find it a lot more pleasing
when done, keep it up man and you will make a decent replay maker

now for the cnc, like i said for both of these you just seem kinda stiff and you twitch a bit, they
arent bad replays overall but you just need to work on the small things, just keep on keeping on
my dude and you are on your way.

Looks Like You Tried The -30 Gravity Thing

Two Hit Program

The opener did what it needed to, but it was quite stiff
I understand if this is your style, but it could look better
I recommend relaxing your shoulders,elbows, and sometimes your pecs
I really think you're better at -30

Kick to glutes was good, but when you relaxed your knee, it looked really bad
I know I said to relax more joints up there, but you shouldn't relax the knee/elbow after getting a hit
Still really nice though

Punch was really slow, and looked really weak
Like gravity said, spend more time, and don't rush you replays
Smooth your joints and movement up

Keep this going and you'll be gold in no time

One Punch Slap

Opener is better, seem to be a bit more relaxed
The movement is great, it's fluid
Not much wrong about it, except maybe it's too long

The "punch" was really well done.
It had power, unlike the one in the replay above
Great punch overall

gj

Thank you muches Gravity and Ray for your CnC
I will keep working, and I'll take my time smoothin things out aswell

I've Returned with a few new replays, had some exams to do so yeah.