I've seen that outline effect so many times since sly taught it to other people and each time i see it i can't help but cringe
the intro wasn't anything original, seen it in a lot of other edits of games and a shit ton from people on toribash, try to make something newish even though i know its hard
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mtv8QptWNbg
this is really helpful
the velo was kinda awful, all of it felt really off beat and it doesn't really flow well with the music. are you using time remap or twixtor?
the cc is kinda whatever, looks like a preset or some generic "this is a chillish rap song so i'm going to use studio 2 and destroy the black tori skin with the shader"
i guess other people could say it looks really good because of it being 60fps 1080p with whatever cc
the freecaming was sort of okay, shame that it was only focused on the entire mid-replay before any action happened like idk the entire ending of the replay before you sped it up for...what reason? maybe try to make a vid with more than 1 replay cause it looked like you were going for the stupid transition EVERYONE has been using recently but then sped it up and cut it for a 10 second vid of you ..messing around
its ok