Burning it down: All right, I like it. It's good and stuff, but I think you should practice spinning around and stuff. All I see is the reversal of your torso to gain some momentum for your kicks.
Dark's not taking prisoners: Mang, this is what I was talking about on the last replay. You need to learn how to spin and keep momentum. Keep it going one way.
Ode to sleep: This is better, just some fluidity issues. Keep on practicing mate.
Dark's not taking prisoners: Mang, this is what I was talking about on the last replay. You need to learn how to spin and keep momentum. Keep it going one way.
Ode to sleep: This is better, just some fluidity issues. Keep on practicing mate.
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Ghost screams:
Pros:
ooh nice movement
cool decap
cool realistic-ish style
Cons:
DON'T LET YOUR WRISTS FLAIL LIKE THOSE AIR BLOW THINGY
a bit boring to watch
Things you should do:
first of all, hold your wrists, they doesn't look good with your cool realistic-ish style and can affect the little physics thingy, also, you have great movement but you have yet to implement all the good stuff into your overall replay, decap is cool but seem a little rushed, you can get more dms before the decap which will make the replay less boring, flow is good throughout the replay, good job, 7/10.
Pros:
ooh nice movement
cool decap
cool realistic-ish style
Cons:
DON'T LET YOUR WRISTS FLAIL LIKE THOSE AIR BLOW THINGY
a bit boring to watch
Things you should do:
first of all, hold your wrists, they doesn't look good with your cool realistic-ish style and can affect the little physics thingy, also, you have great movement but you have yet to implement all the good stuff into your overall replay, decap is cool but seem a little rushed, you can get more dms before the decap which will make the replay less boring, flow is good throughout the replay, good job, 7/10.
