Hey Fiddle.
I'm glad to see you are still working on -30 gravity
The opener was really nice, and you put yourself into a really nice setup for the 2nd jump.
Though, I feel like you were a bit jerky in your movements during take-off.
I edited that jump real quick to kinda' show you what I mean.
I feel as though your chest/pecs and legs were not working very well together-- It seemed (in my opinion) that you rotated your chest too quickly before you got into the air. Doing this causes you to have no way to continue your rotation smoothly, because your chest is already maxed out in one direction. Then, you lowered/contracted your arms very quickly, which slowed you down in the air as well.
I simply tweaked a few things in that jump and smoothed it out a little bit, to kind of give you an idea of what I meant. (Not fully rotating chest at the start of the jump, keeping arm movement a little smoother, etc)
Anyway, you're getting a lot better over the past few months.
Keep it up.