ok hi again

i'm not closing this one, this is my 4th replay thread. i plan on posting A MINIMUM of 2 replays a week, starting and ending every sunday.

hopefully the shit i worked on over at page 2 won't have 4 views again


also this first replay is a starter thing
this is kind of bad but i've spent so much time on that opener i'm exhausted of that, done with it

pretty dank

spins at the beggining were nice, but I don't like that little extra grab after it
all those DMs were sweet
maybe pose?

Infomercial
Pros:
cool opener
flow-ey opener
nice spin execution
Cons:
flow was good until the dms start
head bruised
Things you should do:
alright, the dms are p cool BUT you have to transition it better and not ruin the flow, i mean, the opener is just grade a movement but the dms are shitty one-grab-multi-kick-to get dms type of shit, you could have released the grab right after the first dm and spin again after that to continue the rest of the dms, but i'm a fan of the spins, gj on that, you should try implement your spins to the whole replay instead of just the opener, that way your replays will look much better, decent job overall, keep the spins yo. 6/10.