Even though you did reshape the hood you still need to remove the circular shape that I am guessing is forming the "Head". This is where shadow comes in.
well, shit. wish i saw this before hand. hm... idk. i kind of like the circular. remember, im not going for realism, its cartoonish. but ill see what i can do.
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