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[art] Chris Paul to the Miami Heat
made another one, just wanted to get this finished cause I couldnt work with the shorts

very big (and ugly)



experimented with GFX packs

made in gimp 2.8
Looks nice. Like some old basketball card i used to collect.
Only thing i find out of place is the miami heat logo behind the foot. I think it dosen't look very good there. Also u can move the ppg, rpg text a little to the right
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the logo looks just about fine, but you could remove the "Miami heat" from there, since it says it above already

could also do with a little spacing between the "Chris paul" and "Miami heat"
hell, you can even remove both miami heats since his jersey already says heat. the text being behind his head is unecessary. I would say take off the logo and make it look more dynamic like putting fire on the basketball or something. Make the stats and the rpg font thinner, and remove the box. then it would be perfect imo. Also it would be a good idea to adjust the levels on chris paul since compared to the background, he stands out too much, so make him a tad bit darker. hope this was helpful
first off the picture says miami heat in like 4 different places, try to minimize that next time, personally i think this is the most well placed

the fire/galaxy render behind Chris looks kinda thrown on, try to mix it better, like add a gradient over both the background and the fire and turn it to a lower opacity so the colors dont go straight from black and white to a saturated red

the stat box is on his body and because of that gives it a really clustered feel
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Originally Posted by Insanity View Post
Looks nice. Like some old basketball card i used to collect.
Only thing i find out of place is the miami heat logo behind the foot. I think it dosen't look very good there. Also u can move the ppg, rpg text a little to the right

I kinda rushed this one and usually the text is lined up, I just needed to get it finished. The last one I did had the logo in the bottom right so I just did it again to keep up the symmetry in my work.

It probably looks off because I should have deleted the "Miami Heat" title under the logo

Originally Posted by Surge View Post
the logo looks just about fine, but you could remove the "Miami heat" from there, since it says it above already

could also do with a little spacing between the "Chris paul" and "Miami heat"

Its kinda my style, it looks a little too plain (in my opinion) if I give them a gap between the name and the name of the team

Originally Posted by wetness View Post
hell, you can even remove both miami heats since his jersey already says heat. the text being behind his head is unecessary. I would say take off the logo and make it look more dynamic like putting fire on the basketball or something. Make the stats and the rpg font thinner, and remove the box. then it would be perfect imo. Also it would be a good idea to adjust the levels on chris paul since compared to the background, he stands out too much, so make him a tad bit darker. hope this was helpful

The text is there just to show who the player is. People who dont really follow basketball wouldnt know players like CJ McCollum or Victor Oladipo, so adding the names would help you know who they are. Youre right though, the box doesnt always work with the project and in this case it didnt. Making the background black and white was the point of making him stand out more.

Originally Posted by Velair View Post
first off the picture says miami heat in like 4 different places, try to minimize that next time, personally i think this is the most well placed

the fire/galaxy render behind Chris looks kinda thrown on, try to mix it better, like add a gradient over both the background and the fire and turn it to a lower opacity so the colors dont go straight from black and white to a saturated red

the stat box is on his body and because of that gives it a really clustered feel

I rushed it so ill keep experimenting with the renders. and personally the only bad placement of the team name is the one under the logo

Originally Posted by Micah View Post
Try fading the edges out more so no one will notice you used the universe as the background.

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Last edited by Mzebra; Jul 24, 2016 at 10:46 PM.