Toribash
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[Art] Torigirls, toribash gone SEXUAL
After being inspired by the Anime Us event, and the fact i've had this idea for a while, i've decided to begin drawing some of my favorite toribashers and friends in my own interpretation of their personality, tori, and real life appearance. I thought this would be fun, as well as a good way to practice, seeing as i don't do that enough.

I'll be posting here every now and again with wips and finished products.

Do note that these aren't meant to look exactly like the person's tori or themselves, it is only my imagining of them.. as a female :T

Finished



wips



Program: MediBang paint, wacom bamboo tablet.
As usual, critique is welcome, but please try to keep it relevant and helpful. I'll most likely take critique towards my wips rather than my finished pieces.
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The o_< on skulfuk keeps throwing me off because it's a solid color on something that goes around his...her neck. I think it's intentional, but maybe different placement or make it a different shape to fit the clothes better would help

That's all though, as usual great work. These are neat :]
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They look really cool tho Skulfuks left eye's shape is kinda weird and the placement of the nose and the mouth is kinda weird too and another thing that looks weird is skulfuks left leg it looks like the bone of that leg was broken like this _/ or smth like that.

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keep it going on hampa

well,I guess you should fix skulfuk's left hand.The fingers look long and it's palm is small
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i'm hella excited to see who else you're going to do

it's mainly the left arm that's weirding me out, either something to do with the hand or the entire arm + hand

idk, something about the mouth can be worked on too i guess

fuck, this is cash and hampos lookin' real nice right about now
Last edited by Marrez; Jul 24, 2016 at 03:33 AM.
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I feel like...

the thighs are too big, maybe make it smaller and add curves
the arms are small, I think it would look better if it were a bit bigger
because of this, I suggest making the head a bit bigger to make it look right


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I agree with pretty much all the corrections stated above, but its the arms that are bothering me the most. As stated already, you pretty much made her pretty thick all around, yet for some reason the arms are really really skinny, add some more meat to her arms. Also, her abdomen looks pretty muscular with the way her clothing is fitting it, yet there are no signs of muscle anywheres else on her body, balance that out a bit better.

Overall I fucking love it, text in the background was handled perfectly, really brings this together.
Now if only you would make one of me. </3
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These are really cool, tho. There are obviously some stuff that are a bit odd, but i can look past those, even as an artist.

[DAILY DOSE OF CC] Maybe make the arms a bit thicker to match the rest of the body. Everything is curvy, but the arms are skinny. Maybe even make them slightly muscular, since everyone in toribash has superhuman strength apparently

if you do draw me, my face can be turned into a mask... :3
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