hi

the cc made the video boring, like it feels like it's just tori and uke, and there's no infinite space around them (which im assuming is bc of the contrast)
the sync is real weird, like you could have synced to the synth voice thing instead of i think the clap. that's really my main issue with the video , i can't tell what you're syncing to at all.

your pan and crop is all too intense and sudden. try to make it smooth, but not so smooth it's bouncy and uncomfortable.

..why did the audio start playing twice at 0:19?

well look like i accidentally recorded the replay when listening to the music and forgot to turn the sound down.
i know the cc was suck tho
and the bad sync was bc i did the most of it without even listening to the sound bc my free ram fked up for some reason

http://i.imgur.com/8yP7B0W.png
This is pretty gross and shouldn't be there, use adjustment layers.

How did you not notice the audio while making it?

thats it

Try to set your recording settings to not record audio, and to always make sure to turn the sound off on your video layers.

The sync was really bad, I would have just waited for the ram thing to work again (you can ctrl+click and hold to hear audio to make sure it's syncing to the right thing).

I know you made this edit in like a day or two, don't rush it, take your time with these and learn new stuff or you won't improve at a good pace.

well i never knew that you can play audio only so damn it.
and i make my things in 1-4h mostly just rushed things