ehh lets see
if you are going to edit you should know this things:
1-sync: use twixtor or time remapping to sync something with every beat
like go a little slow and at the exact frame of the beat make it faster and slow after that.
2-learn pan/crop: this also require syncing, whenever you wanna transfer from a shot or cine to another make it at the exact moment of the beat in the song.
3-dont keep the shot clip for so long, specially at trick shots like you have here
others can look dope with time remapping even if you keep them long.
4-use rsmb and magic bullet looks:doesn't need to say anything about those.
5-watch good edits and do like them