head and left arm are perf

right arm seems a bit on the small side

the perspective of the torso and hips are different

i feel like the hips should be overlapping more

also the left thigh seems uneccesarily long

Well for the body position the body parts look disproportionate.
Try fixing the chest and arms .

Yeah, its a good start, the right arm seems to be coming out a bit low though

I corrected some stuff and I think I don't want to finish this well right now I don't maybe I'll do it later...

The right arm is too low, add some shine on the sword. Also make the hair fall down a bit more in the back

well the pose doesnt make sense you have the legs in a landing position while the torso is like its laying on a wall(not in an action position consistant with the legs. stomach to leg tranistion needs work bring it more inward the far arm is too long/low

the head has a deformed skull your missing the round back part of the skull


just my suggested changes below edits in orange

I have a suggestion maybe try shading a bit more on the clothes mostly but
also add some 3d aspects to your drawing or atleast use shading.

Krisis,
Now I see you doing promising drawings.
If you wish PM me and I can try to help you with the coloring

I see no important mistakes in the drawing,
the pose needs a wall, cause it is losing balance, nothing else to complain

again, great drawings, keep doing it.

Thanks everyone for the awesome cnc!
Btw Nesoi this is a Wip so the shading is not finished yet.