Ello !
I n00b !

so, this is my 1st artwork ! :V
it looks pretty ugly !
so, i need CnC
i mean Suggestion or Tips

1st, i draw this in real life :

2nd, i made the sketch at GIMP 2

3rd, im colouring

4th, i made some shadow


And, here is the result :


^.^
if my Artwork have a mistake or somethin'
Post reply about it
also, give me Tips
if it NOT good

ALSO,

I hope Kyle like this

You should watch some tutorials on drawing eyes. They just don't look good at all.

Where's the light source? Shadows are everywhere and anywhere here, except in places where they need to be: under the nose, parts of the face that the hair should block the light

It's my 1st artwork lul :V and thats was why it's looks ugly ! :V
about the light source, it looks pretty ugly if i add light source ( i think )
thx for the CnC btw !

ill do my best next !

The music notes on the left annoy me, stems always go up on the right and down on the left


Also the blood seems a bit out of place

The mouth is not in middle.
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And fix the rough lines

The lines as TimeWorker said are very rough.

And the eyes aren't the same size, they don't look like anime eyes and the mouth my god the mouth..

You should like TyZi said watch some tutorials.

So,

what i need to :

Eye
Line's
Light
Shadow
Middle Mouth

Thx for CnI lul :V
( Comment and Insult.. )

CnC Lul :V

What did you put blood ? You should've put bill in the background
The front strands look very bad too