This is actually really nice. Something that bothered me a bit was at 1:22 where it gets quiet and just screams at your face. If you're going for Melodic, you may want to tone down the jump scares. :P
It is enjoyable in my opinion. I think if it's something about melody it is better to not give any blank seconds (silence), it is what I think but I'm not sure with you, everyone has their own opinion about a certain genre or style of music so yea, you did a good job dude keep it up.