the shaders
they just don't fit the song and made the edit look out of point
it would have looked much better if you used the default blank shader
and the black bars. they also look out of point, i'd suggest leaving it full (maybe little black bars in the top and bottom) and zooming in a little more.
the sync was good but still could look better if you made them slower (to fit the song)
transitions are good.
overall the choices you went for just don't fit together. its way below your standards
now show us sum good shit as u always do