Hi Karstnator, you probably have already noticed that there are some proportion problems in the drawing: one leg is much longer that the other, his lower torso disappears into the legs (he doesn't seem to have a waist), his right knee is too much inside the leg, the torso at a certain points flattens out weirdly and it seems like he doesnt have a pec.

The most evident issue though is the perspective, for example the hand in the front has the same size of the hand in the back. Same thing with his right arm, it seems flat and too short probably because the upper arm's muscles aren't properly placed. I know that it's very hard to obtain a good 3d effect with poses like this so you shouldn't feel bad if the first times it doesn't come out right.

The face on the other hand is good, you got that mostly right and it's solid overall.

Did you use a reference?

The foreshortening on his left hand could look a lot better. I'd recommend moving the hand to the left a bit and making his right hand smaller than the left since its further away.

The characters neck is also really messed up, it looks like his neck has the same diameter of his head.

No nips.

He looks flat chested even though you defined he has muscles & his right pec should be bigger.

This was the first head I ever made:



I made this head when I was in Calamity's clan called "Artist's Guild" or something...


I made this silly looking head with silly looking ears


I re-did that silly looking head with silly looking ears


I think I started to get good by trying to mimic Jebus


Recent head I'm making

I made this 2 weeks ago :^) I draw when I'm bored

gago, ang laki naman ng noo ni gian HAHAHAH

nice drawings. problems are:

kesley's hand. try to use straighter lines when drawing hands, it prevents it from looking like a bubble.

gian and lorenz doesn't have a jawline or rather it's too narrow. try to widen it up a bit and add some BONE

:thinking:

I drew them while they were reading stuff :^)

Drawing hands are... :^(