I'm going to be honest , this looks rushed asf - you added to much blur and i can't see any damn replay at the edit , the velocity is too damn sharp for a Toribash edit how I think.
Also , if You started editing and etc , please for the love of god use 24 FPS composition - 60 FPS isn't good for edits (Only if you doing frag movies than yeah , its better be 60 FPS)
Also , work on your impact and You should to work on transitions because theres no transitions lol.
And the last things are - the pan-crop , I don't even know if you pan-cropped the clips but if you do - you gotta work on your pan-crop too and the last thing is , why the hell you are doing 26 seconds edit with 10 seconds w/ a black screen , it's just makes no sense lol.
But besides all those problems I really liked the moment from 0:11-0:12 , looks cool to my opinion and I liked the CC - that's it.