http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9uMfTkD6F8k

My first video called spit fire.Took me a day and a half to find the right song and replays.please be honest but not harsh.

If the link above dose not work,please click this one:

http://forum.toribash.com/vbtube_sho...63205&p=838523

its god damn epic!what's the song of this movie?

I think it's 'spitfire' by the Prodigy

Its a bit slow at times, and laggy too ? might be due to youtube. Camera angles arent that awesome either ( not throughout but sometimes.. )

its better than that video you made A WHILE ago though ;)

replays were cool btw *admires Ern*

Thanks for the comments guys!Hopefully i'll get better and better.

It was bad :/. Why? Here:
1.You spelt EchoMarine wrong
2.The video was only: Music, Text and Replays. That's nothing amazing.
3.Only video effect was fading to black. You could add some more effects though.
4.Replays weren't so amazing( not that I can make better). You should make something like 4 player replays.
5.You found the right song so you should made it fit >.>
6.There was that [Game] box in left down corner wich was in few replays there.
My thought:
This video seemed like: You added text, made a few screenshots and added text to them, then recorded replays with moving camera in "cool" and "goodviev" way. Then you put all that together and added Thanks for Watching text at the end. You found a song and just put it there.

I wanted to be honest and nice.

You could do better for your first try and you should ask EchoMarine for help. You could do better, but you didn't. Video wasn't so bad actually, it was something between bad-neat.

It was just a littel typo.and I tryed my best and next time it will be better I hope.I cant make amazing videos like Rutzor,Chezda,or Mosier when I just started.They all made alot of videos and they all got better.And thats what im trying to do.

Yeah I know, but mostly shit happens to videos, because many people are making awesome videos. Like FNugget. So they are hungry for more epic videos. Also replays with two players are getting boring. Don't take it to your heart :]

That's what a video is supposed to be.

People like to see pretty explosions and effects though.