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post a poem (self written of course)
Here is my poem... wrote it a while back... i hope that you like it, and I'm waiting to see other poems, I see poems as a way to see the person's true self

Where is this world leading me to?
With all of its twists and turns,
People left and right telling me what to do.
But I can't escape all of the burns.

All of the attacks on me
Pulling me left and right
I don't know where to be
Should I sit or should I fight

If I could only stop and think
But life is going too fast
It's bringing me to the brink
This breath feels like my last

Wait! What? Who?
Where am I?
What did I do?
Did I just die?

NO! I can see!
Although the vision is blurry
He says "Talk with me"
I'm in no hurry

"What is going on here?"
He says "You know"
That begins a tear
soon it starts to flow

He has disappeared,
Left no trace.
It's just as I feared,
I'm back at my place.

I scream "I don't know!!!"
as I fall to my knees
I'm moving slow
I cry "Please!!!"

But there's something new
It's how I feel
I no longer feel blue
It's all real

He has called my name
I go to the call
Forget about the fame,
I will never fall

As long as I am able
I'll go for the light,
He'll keep me stable
As I go for the fight
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
wow nice poem
id write one but im not very poetic lol
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
Here you go my haiku.

Haiku's are easy
but sometimes don't make much sense
God is a pigeon
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
Originally Posted by wetto
Here you go my haiku.

Haiku's are easy
but sometimes don't make much sense
God is a pigeon

lol, quality Haiku wetto
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
Originally Posted by wetto
Here you go my haiku.

Haiku's are easy
but sometimes don't make much sense
God is a pigeon

i can really feel your pain though that poem
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
YEAH
thats a post for me
have a look on guru clanboard there are some of my poems


i have written ca. 200 poems
ill post 5

thats my first one for you

A kind one you´ve been
one of those always in between
a crowd of admire
someone I never dared to desire
and now it´s me looking through
from the other side at you
Wished I had the courage to say
no please don´t go away
I made a mistake
acting as nothing could break
my foolish selfesteem
a little girl I´ve been
too shy to dare
asking if you could please care
a lil´ more about my heart
it was a farewell my dear right from the start
no beginning and no ending
all my hope I was sending
blinded running through
a oneway street leading to you
think about you every day
wished I had the courage to say
maybe at light if you look into my face
you might see the grace
behind my old black cap
but I put it back on my head
afraid an open word might lead to
never being far enough to you
Now maybe you´ve got her on your side
hope she´s worth to your light
hope she makes you smile
the way I could for just a short time while
I find out all I thought was a dream
nothing´s real we only seem
to be two planets accidently
crossing a path never meant to be
wished I had the courage to say
thanks for the sweetness you made me feel that day.
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
As a gaze across the floor,
I feel my joints getting stiff (don't say it perverts)
My knees raise to my chin,
And I felt a lift.
I saw the blue colours,
and a screaming face.
A funny pose,
and a leaning place.
As the kick goes flying,
his punch comes clean.
My hand goes smaller,
He gets really mean.
I pull his arm off,
and he pulls mine.
I seem to splutter,
as my head goes off!
I knew from impulse,
to get him on the ground.
So I swing my other leg,
and dismembered him without a sound.
There was a crack and cough,
As his leg came down.
A blue circle seems to appear,
on the forever white backdrop.
After that,
I knew I had won.


I call that "Judo With Pros Gone Hollywood".
On a completely different topic, I have rugby training tomorrow.
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
here is my 2nd one for ya

Dark circles rising
Out of the hollows of death
Nameless spirits passing
The dark tree
The dead dynasty of tomorrow

Dim screams dying
Into the kingdom of darkness
Anxious souls drowning
The dark ring
The fatal picture of the future

Dark circles rising
Into a darkening sky
Three signs now have arisen
The empty book
Foretelling
Judging
The days of the Forthcoming
Will come now to the end
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
its a poem on toriBash =D!

Originally Posted by DeadorK
As a gaze across the floor, < starting posision
I feel my joints getting stiff < hold all (c)
My knees raise to my chin, < contract knees, contract hips, contract abs
And I felt a lift. < he jumped
I saw the blue colours, < ukes chest area
and a screaming face. < ukes face
A funny pose, < uke starts attacking in wierd ways
and a leaning place. < the floor
As the kick goes flying, < tori starts kicking
his punch comes clean. < uke starts punching
My hand goes smaller, < GRABBY HANDS =D
He gets really mean. < ukes pissed now
I pull his arm off, < self explainitory
and he pulls mine. < self explainitory
I seem to splutter, < blood
as my head goes off! < self explainitory
I knew from impulse, < toriBash black belt experience
to get him on the ground. < tori takeled uke
So I swing my other leg, < another kcik
and dismembered him without a sound. < swift kick
There was a crack and cough, < the dismember sound and that oof sound
As his leg came down. < uke whent limp
A blue circle seems to appear, < UKE D.Q. =D
on the forever white backdrop. < the ground the goes on forever in toribash
After that, < game over
I knew I had won. < RED WINS !!!

thats awsome!
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Re: post a poem (self written of course)
my third for you

a country
a smile
soft answers
honest eyes
a lie
tender fingers
many words
a war
pain
so many tears
silence
a beginning
hope
love
maybe more
truth
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