um just another manipulation i did infact im kinda suprised i did it

dear lord u r going to be the best manipulist(not a word) on the forums soon! Make more ur getting rly good at those i don't know how u target it just right so u jump 'n' kick his head off 9.5/10 very good. do u ever play online i'll look for u

xD not much but sometimes

The throw was pretty good, but there was only one kick, and it wasn't a very smooth one.
7/10 It was good, but I think stealth rates a bit too easily.

ok

Yeah i have to agree with snowflakeG, the throw was ok, but you were too stiff after that, especially with the kick. Get some relaxedness into your movement, just play with your tori. Relax all on times and don't be afraid to just Hit R and start something over by Pausing it with (Shift +) P and Editing from there. Relaxedness makes the kicks more powerful and gives them style. Your getting there so keep up the good work.