7/10
There you go, I'd say you've got a handle on it. Try setting up combos though, because in multiplayer you'll want to hit your opponent when they reach the middle there. And try to avoid self-DMs. Other than that, thanks for posting a replay.
Here's another noobish one. This is the kind of opener I'd expect to see online in muliplayer. The multi-dm hit was just a bonus. <3