Please rate my dismemberment and tell me where I can improve. I know it's pretty simple right now.

use less grab, it will make it look better and up the skill level.

what deady said.

Make it not simple. Simplicity usually isn't stylish.

Buh. Too much grab. The split wasn't bad I guess.


Also, as far as I know, you aren't in DeM. So take the freakin' tag off, and by the way, we're Hive now.

Grab and simplicity is a bad fusion.