For one thing, I was impressed with the no grab. But your moves were really stiff all the same. Try having a few joints relaxed so you have more opportunities.
Good video. 7/10
No grabs are hard. So you instantly get some cool point from me
The only things I didn't like about it were that you spend a lot of time upside down, which always looks funny imo. Also, until I watched it again it didn't look deliberate at all.
But even those can be chalked up to the nograb aspect.