i made this pic in gimp when i was bored. c&c plz. i will be trying to improve this tomorrow when i get home from school.

i'll need to get rid of the white around the characters and resize my tori although it means i start again because i did it in layers and then flattened it.

Meh, kinda fail.

As you mentioned, the outline is still visible from where you cut the image unsmoothly. Poses are kind of bland and unappealing, and it doesn't seem like that high of a quality. Maybe get a friend to take some screenshots in shaders and try to make the poses more "dance like."

Dance floor is kinda cool tho.

Fail…
The picture already has shaders…

ONtopic: Its good, I like it 8/10

horrible cutout, no lighting, boring background.

2/10

agree with Mapleleaf, also they have no shadows, and they are not standing in the right angle as seen in the background.

thnks for comments i gonna have another go when i get back from school coz i posting this on a school computer right now.

it is good but you have to be better