I know these arnt great but for me they aint half bad.

not quite a madman.rpl

Back Split Decap.rpl

My Nooby Skillz.rpl

Pro 1.rpl

Break x3.rpl

Please C&C thanks

and another...


Decap Hand Rocket.rpl

please comment and critisise

P.S watch this one (after watching it in the normal veiw) in veiws 5 and 6 its pretty cool

Thanks

Good One
I didnДt see all of them, but the decaps were 8/10 (I already saw betters, but that was very good...^-^)

Break x3 is 7/10, I liked, but you threw yourself in Uke... And that wasnДt SOOOO cool, but you are better than me...=p

C ya!

lol thanks :P any one else wanna comment?

ok... this is constructive critism:

1. Try to relax more... your moves are way too stiff
2. Try to avoid lots of tries to break a joint... It should be done at the first try
3. Make them faster... long periods of flying or something like that become boring very fast
4. Self DMs in replays don't look good... (maybe in some special ones...) if you complete a replay and got no Damage it becomes better automtically ^^
idk should be all for know ^^

no bad replays after one month... you'll learn to control your tori after some month months don't stop practising... idk if you do... but play some multiplayer so you learn how to react on your opponent...

ok good luck and have fun ^^

WoW, that helped me, too! Thanks

C Ya!

and kudo one tip... try to avoid excessiv-smiley-using... looks very newbie on the forums ^^

If there is anything you want to know... just ask somebody ^^ the tb communty is (most times) very friendly.