Toribash
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Coffee Table Style
Welp, been a long time Toribash. Finally getting some new stuff out there.
Anyways, the name comes from the fact that my replays are a bit more... elegant than most. At most, one or two dismemberments with no grabs, and a relax allish style. Different than the average madman that shitholes this forum on a daily basis in my opinion.

http://www.box.net/shared/cpk2eanni9
[17:02] <Homer> anyone up for some tb?
01[17:09] <BlackBear> No.
[17:12] <Homer> >.>
[17:13] <Dafe> TB is what killed Doc Holiday.
They're nice. I liked the third one. The first ones decap was a bit "nooby-like" :|

8/10
[T] | ORMO
[20:18] <@Cevius> Like semen?
Explain your thoughts on the first one in more detail, please.
[17:02] <Homer> anyone up for some tb?
01[17:09] <BlackBear> No.
[17:12] <Homer> >.>
[17:13] <Dafe> TB is what killed Doc Holiday.
They were all good but seemed "not finnished".
they all had some nice "zing" and style to them that They were all good but the Decap in the first one was twitchy and didnt seem to have any momentum into it. try and planning before you Decap him of what your going to do like maybe right after the plit contract that elbow and have some momentum and power to them.
and alos on the last one try getting a 3 piece boomhit into it for the extra UHphhh the replay needed.

8/10

Edit: for your first replay the Decap could have been something like this
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Last edited by KronosLord; May 10, 2009 at 03:35 AM.
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<Muse> hush little kronos, dont you cry, Muse is gonna sing you a lullaby
Kronos: Notice what I said. I don't do boomhits. It's what everybody else does.
[17:02] <Homer> anyone up for some tb?
01[17:09] <BlackBear> No.
[17:12] <Homer> >.>
[17:13] <Dafe> TB is what killed Doc Holiday.
and thats what I love about you you seem different and free.
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<Muse> hush little kronos, dont you cry, Muse is gonna sing you a lullaby
Originally Posted by BlackBear View Post
Kronos: Notice what I said. I don't do boomhits. It's what everybody else does.


True that, still though...a decent pose wouldnt hurt them.

I basicly like the replays, they are above average. I really liked the opener in the first one, yet it bothered me a little bit that you just fall over after you're done, kinda makes the replay look incomplete.

All in all good work, pose a bit next time and i'll gladly comment again.
<Alan> lol, rutz, it might be cool to smell your ass all the time you touch the mic



http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn298/H4rl/PS/deathnote1-2.png
Posing has never been my forte. I see it as the rest after sexual intercourse, you don't pose, you fucking fall over half dead. Anyways, thanks for the comments. I'll probably get that first one with a new second part soon.
[17:02] <Homer> anyone up for some tb?
01[17:09] <BlackBear> No.
[17:12] <Homer> >.>
[17:13] <Dafe> TB is what killed Doc Holiday.
Not very different at all, quite disappointing actually. Most of your hits seemed rushed and came without much indication. They were somewhat clean, which is probably the only thing that really differentiates you from the other "average" replays you find on this forum. You've done much better than this, I expect more from you.