Originally Posted by
Xmaster959
told u it was noobish
If you knew it was noobish then why did you post it? If you're expecting comments it's just gonna be what you think is was, noobish. And the fact you called it sweet makes it worse. If you're expecting advice, it's still gonna be the same old same old, relax more etc etc etc.
With that said just keep playing until you get better. Take a look at replays from ORMO. When you are certain you're half as good as they are then you should be posting replays.