well iv been playing toribash for a little while now and i decided
that i would post my fav replays.
i have others but there not quite as good as these.

Nice replays, but I liked the first most. I had to look twice to see how you decapped Uke, it was really quick. also I like it that they're not to chaotic. first one 9/10, second 8.5/10

thanks for the quick reply and critiscsm meamme.
and yes i do belive the first vid is much better then the second one (if you notice all the failed attempt at dismember and i didint relise this at the time, the dismember ratio was 175).

You tried to dismember him 415 frames, about 335, then again at 274 frames, right? well that's where the kicks ( I thought it would dm him too at 415 and 274) were. too bad, but it still owned ;) Good job

very nice ^__^

*Blasts into thread like a drunken sailor*

I have this weird habit of commenting new replay makers more than the old ones. >.>
Anyways, your stuff isn't bad, but you're too stiff and robotic in all your moves. You should apply some relaxed joints here and there, and also move more joints at a time. Preferrably both. You should also learn to use your momentum better. The first kick in the second replay, for example, has a fair amount of potential (i managed to land a boomhit with it), but you just end up doing a more or less unexciting heel from behind.
To put it in a list:
- Less stiffness
- More use of momentum
- More power
Overall, i'll give you a 5/10. Mind you, 5/10 is not a bad rating, it means average. Anything below would be bad, though.

Shook: prefare New replay makers becuase they dont think "oh what a n00b he is."
and i also like that you dont know there style when it happens.
ok the replays.....eh they seem a bit slow and i dont consider it a madaman until you get both legs both arms and the head off but still ok. try to relax (all the time) and dont wait in between attacks do them in a nice fluid motion and make sure you dont keep the same grab the whole replay dismember, re-grab, dismember, re-grab etc....
ok but not great.
7/10

thanks for the responses
i took what i got from the comments into cosideration and put together a quit new replay (and this one is a madman as according to kronoslords definition)

Be more relaxed, press 'c' every now and again. That wasn't bad, it was a bit mesy at time but overall good - 7/10

well i went to edit my last replay and see if i could fix some of the
uglyness and all that aand ended up with some thing very diffrent
but MUCH better imo.