you should watch and comment on it. i probably sucks but at least give me some constructive criticism

It was a bit grabby and it got no decap or split. Not super bad but not very good either.

7/10

you need to demolish more, nuf said by me

Dosent look that great =/ 6/10

Ehh... Average. You're relaxed, which is a good thing, but your move just didn't have that flashy factor, and you didn't dismember the "good" joints, so to say. I'd also like to see some more winding up, which makes stuff both better and more powerful. You don't have to constantly move closer to Uke, either. Keep a certain distance, strike at opportune moments, and make it look intentional. Being a little more daring in your attacks wouldn't have been bad either.

5/10

Keep editing it, or even do a new one, so you have a replay that at least has a decap in it if you want people to like it

not finished. nuff said.

Err...

4/10 I Dont Like It. I <3 Kicks 4 Eva.

U Dont Decap Uke. U Dont Broke He's Chest. So 4/10