okay, i know that i'm not good at toribash but im mainly just doing this for tips.
okay the replays

Ok the best tip to improve your replays is be faster. There are too many long pauses between dm's which just slow the pace down and make them boring. Try to be more quick and snappy with the dm's. Also, relax relax relax. At the start of a replay, don't press 'c' to hold all, just start making moves with a relaxed Tori. It's that simple.

Keep playing, you'll get better