http://www.box.net/shared/o0k2fem4pi
Sorry for not being embedded.
I have been using Flash for around 3 days, and this is my first attempt at it.
No tutorials have been used, this is 100% screwing around. Realize that this is not finished yet, and criticism is appreciated.
Rate and whatnot.
Also, tips are appreciated too.
When this is finished, I'll clean it up, so sorry for jumpy keyframing.

It's a very nice flash. And the fact that this is your first attempt makes it even better. 9/10 because it's unfinished but keep it coming!

way better than yesturday!

On the menu yo shoudlnt be able to spam start tho :P

i'm waitin for some bitchin music. good job so far

Looks very nice. I enjoyed it. Didn't look jumpy at all.

nice. Considering it is your first! It wasnt laggy or slow. And it did make sense..sort of.

9/10

This was really good, it wasn't juddery or laggy or anything, very impressive for a first attempt.

Thanks for the feedback guys.
I'll keep updating this thread as I add more to the film.

[Borat]This is very nice[/Borat]

Keep up the good work.

Hmmmmmm... Not bad! Good Job!